the human fur is burnt
31Aug09
the human fur is burnt
I wanted the fire to rise off of its keeper and spit up its fury onto the cliffs
of their shoulders. I wanted their trance-like curiosity to make the shape
of gray smoke and puff up the sacs of their lungs while they choked on
the swamp of their voyeurism.
I’m the magic and the mundane, naked and dishonest, I am knife and bladed
spine. I hold the attention of the virtuous and empty. I break the will and block
the path of the sovereign. I suck up the soft earth, pulling in the meat of seal,
shellfish, and sheep.
I spear the crowd. Their heavy eyes close—hypnotic coil, dance, dark, dense,
food for fire is the oil of hair—the human fur is burnt.
It crumbles like an antique September snow.
for ReadWritePoem Prompt #90
Filed under: brain matter, curious, dangerous, holograms, humanoid | 10 Comments

Great images in there. And it flows well too.
geometry of fireworks cuts into me
This is the first of your work that I have read. I have to say that you have a remarkable talent to create imagery and meaning in your poems. I will link to you so that I can follow your mind. I enjoyed “The human fur is burnt.” Thanks.
DH
Like Donald….first time I have read your words….very nice….and your name …wow…that is really poetry also…love it
I like the willingness in this to range widely from the photographic “facts” into your imagination. The repeated use of “I” and short, bold declarative lines make for great momentum.
I very much like the paired antonyms, “I’m the magic and the mundane, naked and dishonest…” Nice!
The diabolical speaker is all will and willpower; however, at the very moment when he gets what he wills (ugly burning), he also loses it (beautiful antique September snow). There is deep truth in this win/lose dualism.
Oh, wow. This is fantastic. Just fantastic. There’s nothing superfluous here. You build and build these smoldering images until by the time you get that last line, that last word, “snow” — it’s like plunging a burning hand into ice water.
I love this! Looking forward to reading more of your poems in response to Read Write Poem prompts.
It reminds me a little of “The Thunder: Perfect Mind” from the Nag Hammadi texts.